Yes, I'm butting in here to post, because it's evening of the 4th here, and there is no post! So join me in the boasting progress reports and encouragement for this day's creative work!
You're making a lot of progress, and this is another effective scene! One thing about making it several stories is that you can kind of jump over certain plot holes. Not that I would ever do a thing like that mind... ;)
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on 2012-07-04 10:28 pm (UTC)no subject
on 2012-07-04 10:45 pm (UTC)*nods* However, there are definitely some more scenes that I have to write to make the plot hang together and so on :)