Day 7 (Team July)

[wiseheart.livejournal.com]

Here is the post to update with any extracts, thoughts, or comments you might have for today.

I'm saying good-bye for a week, leaving you in the most capable hands of elmey until Day 15. Happy writing!

Comments

[elmey.livejournal.com]

Welcome, and don't worry--this is a great place to try things out; we're all struggling writers :)

I like the way this evokes a sense of panic, the loss of comfort in what was familiar.

[steph2311.livejournal.com]

Thank you

To me my Mikael is raw and I want to develope him