ext_7267 ([identity profile] altariel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] picowrimo2006-11-18 01:26 pm
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Day Eighteen

Please post today's updates/excerpts/thoughts/etc. in comments.

Here's today's daily prompt for your updates, excerpts, any thoughts, etc.

Yesterday's post: Day Seventeen

[identity profile] tianaluthien.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 05:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, so far I'm at aprrox. 3500 words which exciteth me greatly. But what exciteth me even MORE is the fact that I actually have A CLEAR VISION for this story. I can see the path and I know exactly what's on it, minus the exact details. WOO-HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Didn't get any writing done last night though -- after a very long week and a couple hours chilling in front of the TV I tumbled into bed at 11.00 and proceeded like a log. A submerged log. Should get something today though -- not much work I can do without access to the school server...

[identity profile] forodwaith.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Escellent! Nothing like knowing where you're going.

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 07:46 am (UTC)(link)
That's excellent news. Getting the words down should be easy now.

[identity profile] greenlily.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Seeing the path is such a great feeling. :)
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[personal profile] paranoidangel 2006-11-20 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Woohoo! That is fantastic, both for the number of words and knowing what's going to happen in it.

[identity profile] forodwaith.livejournal.com 2006-11-18 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
103 words today, not very impressive but at least I didn't skip two days in a row.

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[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 07:48 am (UTC)(link)
I keep telling myself, just keeping plugging away is the answer.

[identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
After the ecstasy of reaching halfway on day 15, the last two days have been complete washouts. Today, I've managed 516, which is poor for a Saturday, but it's so much better than nothing that I feel I've recovered a little momentum.

I'm also more encouraged about the project as a whole. In total, I've now written about 58,000 words of the whole novel, and I have a growing sense of where I'm heading and of the remaining chapters that will take me there.


The local lords were a strange sight. Those dressed as nobles rode with slumped shoulders and nervous faces. Beside them, squires in simple clothing rode with arrogant anger.
Lytellia chuckled. “Oh, I’d forgotten. These absurd creatures are following that bizarre festival. You know, when servants and masters swap clothes.”
Massetta grinned. Perhaps there was a chance for some fun.


[identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Oops, correction. Total words are actually about 49,000

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 07:50 am (UTC)(link)
It's great that you've got a sense of where the novel wants to go, I'm sure that's half the battle. And 516 words -- definitely not to be sneezed at.

[identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 12:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow! You've been hitting a wall, yet are still making your current spectacular progress?
**Watches in awe as Altariel1 demolishes the 60% barrier**
You'll have to lend us all that bulldozer you've been using.

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
Yesterday was a bit of a washout; I was hoping to write a lot, and instead I wasted time and slept. Nevertheless 336 words seem to have crept onto the tally somehow.

Losing one suitor to a duel was appalling, unspeakable! Losing two—the vocabulary of a lady simply did not stretch to the event.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 08:46 am (UTC)(link)
Unless one could use the word 'careless' of course. ;-)

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 08:58 am (UTC)(link)
Deuced careless, I'd say!

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
I fear I'm suffering from the Dreaded Expectations Creep. Also, more rationally, starting to get nervous about my promised [livejournal.com profile] yuletide story, which I haven't even thought about yet, and will take some considerable ingenuity.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 08:43 am (UTC)(link)
I don't write every day, but I passed the 5000 mark today, so I've put an arbitrary total of 10,000 on the counter. However the story will be finished when it is.

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Excerpt:
Avon was lying spread-eagled on his back in a clearing, and a lion was standing over him with a paw on each of his hands. Avon turned his head to look at me, the whites of his eyes showing. "Vila, do something!"

"Got any suggestions?"

He rolled his eyes "I don't know, take a thorn out of its paw or something."

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 09:00 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, very well done! And Avon meeting Aslan, now there's an interesting thought.

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 09:25 am (UTC)(link)
Avon does not fit in well in Narnia. ;-)

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 10:03 am (UTC)(link)
It's a long-held opinion of mine that Avon doesn't fit in well anywhere.

[identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 09:13 am (UTC)(link)
Congratulations on hitting your original target. I hope you've got some way of rewarding yourself :)

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
I hadn't thought about it. Perhaps lunch out tomorrow (which is Monday here).

[identity profile] vilakins.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
He's too grown-up to remember it well afterwards though.

[identity profile] six-old-cars.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 09:10 am (UTC)(link)
No words at all on day 18. I was out from 8am to 10pm and was feeling decidedly unwell (and not just feeling by the time I got home)

[identity profile] espresso-addict.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 10:04 am (UTC)(link)
Sorry you're unwell -- hope you are feeling better today.

[identity profile] tawek.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Hope you feel better, SixOldCars, and it's nothing a quick oil change won't sort out.

[identity profile] six-old-cars.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks everyone. I'm a little better today, so I should get some writing done.

[identity profile] greenlily.livejournal.com 2006-11-19 06:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi everyone. Still here, still reading your triumphs, tribulations and snippets. Haven't touched my fic for the better part of a week, due to job and rehearsal/performance commitment timesinks. One of the shows has closed, though, so I should be able to get back into it. :)