Pico day 19

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Here is the post for any comments, snippets or thoughts.

May the magic be with us all!

Comments

[espresso-addict.livejournal.com]

Kudos for getting writing done around the socialising -- that's always tricky. I like the repetition & the hint of rhyme in the penultimate sentence. It feels very neat, just like the protagonist.

I'd probably go with the plural? I'm not sure I'd use 'to' at all -- 'at'?