Good progress! Nice snip there. I like the picture of Jack, trying to remain neutral, aloof in the face of a painful reminder of his brother. Very nice.
Thank you. Chronologically, this story is supposed to take place after Season 2 of Torchwood, only that I refused to kill off Tosh and Owen. So yeah, Jack already had to face his brother and the vengeful acts of said brother and can better understand Ethan's motivations than anyone else, I think.
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on 2021-03-17 08:19 pm (UTC)Good luck with finishing the chapter!
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on 2021-03-17 09:51 pm (UTC)