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on 2021-07-11 04:21 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] candidlily.livejournal.com
Congrats on the success! As for the word order, I think it suggests both, if I'm understanding your meaning. Good luck with the finale!

on 2021-07-11 09:35 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] sallymn.livejournal.com
Good progress! I think the last sentence does come across as you wish (I personally would take out the 'though', but then my grammar isn;t always what it should be :)

on 2021-07-11 10:07 pm (UTC)
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Posted by [identity profile] ylla.livejournal.com
Where I think your word order might have got mixed is the sentence before - there's a difference between having something to do with x (connectedness) and having to do something with x (responsibility).

Intriguing, though!

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