I like that part with all the twists and turns the conversation takes before getting back on track. You've definitely got something you can work with there.
Thank you! And Kathe and Hardy seem to be developing a relationship of sorts, even if it's rather antagonistic, which is all to the good. And any writing is better than no writing.
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