Day 4 (Team July)

[kerravonsen]

Yes, I'm butting in here to post, because it's evening of the 4th here, and there is no post! So join me in the boasting progress reports and encouragement for this day's creative work!

Comments

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Very powerful.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Real Life should know when to quit.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Great work there!

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

A sad excerpt indeed. Poor Maurice.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

A tricky bit of conversation there.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Great inner monologue there, well mixed in with the action.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

That's still good progress.

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Your lot are worse than my lot with the inheritance thing.

[kerravonsen]

8-)

[kerravonsen]

Thank you!

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\o/

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[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Hope you have fun rereading, and good luck sorting out the plot holes!

Great description in this - certainly sounds like they are taking all possible precautions!

[kerravonsen]

Oh, I like this. Poor Illya. And both of them so very careful not to seem emotional.

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Looks like you are making a lot of progress!

Intriguing... :)

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Poor you! It sounds like a really unpleasant situation. Good luck!

[kerravonsen]

Exciting!
Though I am puzzled by the phrase half in and half out of the ladder because I don't think of ladders as something one can be inside of.

[kerravonsen]

Yes, of course it is progress!

[stevie-carroll.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[kerravonsen]

(grin) Ridiculous lengths indeed.

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Covering his tracks, hmmmm?

[saki101.livejournal.com]

Thank you :-D (Down to the last little bit now.)

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Thank you! It all feels related, as I've having to do so much worldbuilding and character building (given the lack of much detail in canon), I guess I should try and fill in the important gaps and then see what feels right from there.

Things are going to be hard for her... but not all bad

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)

[jenn-calaelen.livejournal.com]

Thank you! :)